Summary:
In Andrea Donsky's article "What's so bad about GMO's? Top
ten reasons to avoid them", she expresses to her readers that they are
most likely consuming food which are GMO based without knowing, due to the lack
of labeling by companies. She then lists off and explains the effects of these
harmful GMO’s on the human body.
Analysis:
The
purpose of this article is to inform people about genetically modified
organisms and their effects. By informing more people about this issue, Donsky
is able to thoroughly inform her readers, who may not even be aware of this
situation, and allow them to take some sort of action. One important claim she
makes about the lack of labeling food is that " [the attempt of] federal
regulations on labeling foods that contain GMO's, none have passed" which
allows for food companies to not have to legal inform their consumers of what
they’re actually eating, and wont risk the fear of losing clients. But the
biggest risk of these companies not telling their customers by not labeling the
food, is that the GMO’s may badly impacts the health of individuals and cause a
risk of people getting very sick and they wouldn’t even be aware of it
happening. She exclaims the fact that GMO’s have only been in our system since
the mid 90’s and people don’t know the true harm of these GMO’s on our bodies
since they haven’t been out long enough to do thorough testing. This leaves the
consumers to have no knowledge and no real proof of what these GMO can cause
and what the effect on their bodies can actually be. Some known negative
impacts they have include "pesticides...cancer...environmental...super
weeds...patent issues..." but it doesn’t disregard the fact that there
could always be more that have not been discovered yet. By choosing all the
negative impacts and effects that GMO’s have, Donsky can argue for her readers
to not consume the GMO’s and allows them to be aware of what is going into
their bodies and gives them reason to fight for GMO labeling so no one cane be ignorant
of what they can cause.
Work Cited
Donsky, Andrea. "Top 10 Reasons to Avoid GMOs." Top 10 Reasons to Avoid GMOs. Naturally Savvy, 9 Sept. 2014. Web. 28 Feb. 2016. <http://naturallysavvy.com/eat/whats-so-bad-about-gmos-top-ten-reasons-to-avoid-them>.
Your summary is good and succinct. Your analysis starts off good when you talk about the readers, but I think in the middle of your paragraph you start summarizing a bit rather than analysis. Yet, you have some analysis which is really good other than the fact that you summarizing a bit in the analysis. Also, your work cited seems to be correct.
ReplyDeleteThe summary was concise and to the point. You provide elaborate explanations of donkeys point of you but I feel like you need to analyze how it connects to your argument better. Aside from that, great job.
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